Bristi hole shwopnoneer-e hurhuriye jol dhoke,
Nachte gelei achhar khabi, shamle dhori mon toke.
Baranda-r dorja khana pokko haather surgery.
Kaada jol-e paa dubiye raatri jege paayechari.
Rosh paayi na bhaath-er fyan-e, rosh paayi na bisna-te.
Rosh-er khoj-e shukno manush, nidra chhanchi majh-raate.
Aar jonmer jomaano beesh daag enke deye shorir-moy.
Sheera-ye sheera-ye beesh dhelejaai, hoye jodi hok bishokkhoy.
Raat puriye bhoshmo kurai, raat furaleyi ondhokar.
Ondhokaar-e huul futiye, jonmacchi barombaar.
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20 paper boats came floating back to me:
i din understand anything, but the picture looks good :P
I bow in reverence,
I bow to the divinity...
to show you how the words felt,
all I seek is eternity....
Scribblers Inc.
P.S.- Please dont mind the verse...all I wanted to put across was the fact that such an honest act of writing is rare...much appreciated.
I am with sawan...didn't understand but it sounded very nice. Very poetic!!
I haven't read much Bengali writing but I am glad I could read and understand this!
"Baranda-r dorja khana pokko haather surgery.
Kaada jol-e paa dubiye raatri jege paayechari
Love these lines!
*astounded* ek odbhut unmadona ache kobita ta te... "Aar jonmer jomaano beesh daag enke deye shorir-moy"...so wonderfully silent and beautiful...
i don't have enough words to tell you how I feel abt this poem....each and every line, touched me .... keep walking!!!
Besh bhalo laglo. Kobita-ta ki shaurochito? Ar ha, chhobi-tao oshadharon - na bole parlam na ;)
didnt quite get it tho.... nice pic tho.. is it your painting??
wow! And, did you draw that?! Its just amazing!
Nice painting .. and i assume the poem is nice too, though a translation would surely help :)
LGL,
you got few awards from me....do take them :)
That pic almost got me fired from the office. Grrrr....
Give a warning or something next time, will ya?
Guess its a different lingo
sala,last line-e matra ghatli kyano?
Would that I understood Bengali. But it was fun to read aloud anyway. :-)
Khub bhalo laglo, just that, english horofe lekhay porar somoy chondo ta kete jacchilo, dui tin bar porar por besh bhalo laglo.
rat purie bhosmo ta ki ashtray tei joma hoy?
Ar, bangla horofe lekha jay na?
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নাচতে গেলেই আছাড় খাবি, সামলে ধরি মন তোকে।
বারান্দার দরজা খানা পক্ক হাতের সার্জারী--
কাদা জলে পা ডুবিয়ে রাত্রি জেগে পায়চারি।
রস পাই না ভাতের ফ্যানে, রস পাই না বিছানাতে
রসের খোঁজে শুকনো মানুষ, নিদ্রা ছাঁচি মাঝরাতে।
আর জন্মের জমানো বিষ দাগ এঁকে দেয় শরীরময়,
শিরায় শিরায় বিষ ঢেলে যাই, হয় যদি হোক বিষক্ষয়।
রাত পুড়িয়ে ভষ্ম কুড়াই, রাত ফুরালেই অন্ধকার,
অন্ধকের হুল ফুটিয়েম জন্মাচ্ছি বারম্বার।
abar porlum..bhalo legeche
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