Buno Mainak said...
"good,intense,tight but cliche.overused words and images crowd together....we want sum fre
shness from ur pen,dear"Your constructive criticism
Does not help me grow.
I am a rodent size person
With a whale size ego.
Treat this as an entreaty
from a much pampered friend.
If you like it, exaggerate.
If you don't, pretend.
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16 paper boats came floating back to me:
haha Well said! :)
:P
OH! Ditto! Totally true for me! (Noticed the dwindling number of posts on my blog?)
I suppose I should write something on these lines to let *cough cough* certain *ccough cough *people know. So, if you see one, you'd know what's the inspiration. :)
whale size ego.....hmmmmm.. :)
I like the last two lines! Impressive! Short yet says a lot...
Great Lines dear.Thanks for sharing.Sorry actually i was bit inactive on my blogs.
You can see my new blog - Lost2angels
i am no Ahab,dear but have too much wax in my ears to listen to your entreaty. :).
and i promise you to continue my business until you kick me out.
kanchi ar kornater golpe sei bidusok ke mone achhe to?
btw,last two lines are intense and filmy.like to use them in sum gangstar movie.[:P]
I love the last two lines! :) Update more often please...
But then you'll never know,
Whether the praise was genuine,
Or just to butter your ego!
Kudos! Loved every word of it. I completely endorse your views :-)
Gahahahaha!!!
That is the best comeback ever! Period.
perfect!
Ami tomar blog er notun follower ... iloved several of your verses especially acid bhebe chhetash ne ar muut and the reply to your critic.You may be happy to know that some people are quoting you on facebook and pretending that they are the original poets... Infact tader i post dekhe amar shondeho holo and i googled the lines... awesome work.
Hello Krystal Virus... thank you for reading... I've stopped blogging for some time now, but i plan to start again soon, this month hopefully... It was interesting to know that people are quoting me... that really is funny.
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