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Thursday, March 31, 2011

Tonight we drink to heartache




Tonight we drink to heartache, and we can't get drunk enough

You crush each individual grape between your toes.

Your eyes are numb as you sense the juices flow.

And we curl our fingers around your momentary love.

We lay down in your coalstack but we are not warm enough.

You crush each individual grape between your toes.

Each lover kisses your drying blood to life before he goes.

We hold your head steady in your pool of eternal love.

We light ourselves a fire around the secrets that you grow.

Each moment is eternal that you crush between your toes.

And before you bury us we hold you long and deep.

Eternal is a moment in your drunken dreamless sleep.

Amritorupa Kanjilal also writes at Rivers I Have Known: Books, Reviews, and More. Please visit her there!

17 paper boats came floating back to me:

Unknown said...

Something really brought to life..
Keep up!Keep writing.

buno mainak said...

chhowa chhuyi khele nilo....besh aabdar-e

Shruti said...

Loved it. Keep writing. :)

zephyr said...

beautifully said... :)

pradipwritenow said...

darun sundar kichhuta Kamla dash ke mone poriye dei. ei kobita pore ekhni kichhu charitro jego uthlo tahder kotha amai ebar likhite hobe

Ire said...

:)Very well said

Zeba said...

wow. lovely to come back to this space after so long and be greeted with this piece.

Akash said...

aar kobita dekhte pai na keno???? majhe modhdhe ghure jai...kichu nei... :(

The rivers I have known...are no more what it used to be...eto sundor ekta blog chere diyo na...Will be waiting for more posts..

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Scribblers Inc said...

Came here after a long time...sometimes I am glad when things don't change. Like the sea maybe.
And this blog.

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Anonymous said...

Seems to be a season for heartache! "This too shall pass"

Unknown said...

I really cherish u'r words & the webbing thoughts around them..
Have been really missing out!!
:-(

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Anik. said...

Awesome , smart and unpredictable ...

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