Buno Mainak said...
"good,intense,tight but cliche.overused words and images crowd together....we want sum freshness from ur pen,dear"
Your constructive criticism
Does not help me grow.
I am a rodent size person
With a whale size ego.
Treat this as an entreaty
from a much pampered friend.
If you like it, exaggerate.
If you don't, pretend.
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