Kon hashi ta kothaay haashi, ulto-palta birombona.Bus-er bhire hothath dekha buuk-er khaajer uttejona.
Udor theke pitthi hoye uttejona golaa-e othe.
Ghamchi ami, gilche aamay kolonkito toshok-khana.
“Biye-er porei meye-ra emon pichon theke mutoye keno?"
Aar kota mash, tarpore to kol-tola te aar jabo na…
Chobi ta ki chena gelo?
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24 paper boats came floating back to me:
Please translate. I am sure it reads damn good in Bangla. But please explain!
Nikki- shame on you.
Long absence, L'tl girl!!!
Missing you dear:)
Sorry. I come from half gujju-bong background. My vocab in Bangla is not good. :(
Ah!!! Marriage - that dampener of all that is exciting and arouser (no pun intended) of all that is prosaic.
Darun chhondo aar fatafati WIT! Glad to read you whenever, whatever. But could not recognise the pix. Some Devdas?
If am not wrong...the pic is from HERBERT????
wow...*paused to wonder for some better word to express the feeling* apurbo...*nods..* hmm...aschorjojonok bhabe adbhut!!!!!
Awshaadharon nongraa! :)Birombawnaar beno-jawl ey lawbon mekhey writurokto shukochchhey...ekla ekla roddurey...
Given your comment at my blog, I guess I can safely assume this poem too is 'shorochito' ;)
On a more serious note - very nice. I would go so far as calling it nonsense verse for adults. Sukumar Ray might have winked in appreciation had he got to read it. And Chandril might just love it (again, provided he gets to read it).
By the way, I'd be interested to know what you meant with these lines...
"Biye-er porei meye-ra emon pichon theke mutoye keno?"
Aar kota mash, tarpore to kol-tola te aar jabo na…"
tomarta dekhabe buki?
kolongkito rokto bole
aamar prem tor chobole
tobe keno aakash bhange
brishtir probole? .... keep walking!!!
bangalir aadda it seems...I wish I was a lil more well equipped to leave bengali verses here...great work overall...much appreciated...
The twist in the tail takes the cake...and also brings the entire picture into perspective as well...
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chena gelo ki gelo na thik bujhe uthte parchi na, tobe, kon haashi ta kothay haashi boro bhalo laglo.
Kol-tola te na jaoa ta ektu bishad korle bhalo lagbe
wish u had put the translation too in here!!!
Yo no sé lo que usted dice aquí, pero nosotros le perdemos.
mash furolo, para jurolo, kobita nei deshe...
Anondomoyee kobita niye eso notun beshe
:P
English please :P
and where have you been, verse queen?
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Hey LGL!
Long time! last two poems ate Bangla! me totally lost!
Dropped to wish u A VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!
hope all is well? hope u have a great year ahead! hugs!!!!!!!
Hi..remember me..I am Subhadip Majumdar..from Writer's column..took a long break..now I am back..you are one of my great followers..can you please come again and review my new post..anyway your recent poems are great..asadharan..I hope u hvn't frgt ur friend..
LGL... where are you??? your writing is soooo missed...
Kabitta ta asadharan hyce..tumi to adbhut sundar lekho..kmn acho? Ami Subhadip..chite parco to..scrap koro kintu..
notun lekha kothae???
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