tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7443649196688123428.post5168275820111916927..comments2024-03-22T02:17:54.364-07:00Comments on Rivers I Have Known: Just Before The StormAmritorupa Kanjilal http://www.blogger.com/profile/05297857308903060458noreply@blogger.comBlogger92125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7443649196688123428.post-74942903060146918562009-05-22T05:34:25.278-07:002009-05-22T05:34:25.278-07:00I was having samosa's at Deshapriya Park when said...I was having samosa's at Deshapriya Park when said rains fell... ever since I've been trying to write an article about it - it's been 5 years since I got wet in Calcutta rains - but couldn't get my thoughts to do justice to what I felt. In any case, I guess someone beat me to it. Lovely writing. :) <br /><br />The Comedian.The Comedianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16554998139930685306noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7443649196688123428.post-54783190335287384352009-05-15T03:33:00.000-07:002009-05-15T03:33:00.000-07:00i re-read it again n again n again. i sooooo loved...i re-read it again n again n again. i sooooo loved it. :)Preetilata【ツ】https://www.blogger.com/profile/09139256480968459892noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7443649196688123428.post-67086763651857261632009-05-13T04:59:00.000-07:002009-05-13T04:59:00.000-07:00Clouds in baritone
Voices sing,
A drop lands on
A ...Clouds in baritone<br />Voices sing,<br />A drop lands on<br />A heron’s wing<br /><br />Refreshing<br /><br />keep it rollin;)Amit Charleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04724336704950643314noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7443649196688123428.post-78225536993315166202009-05-11T04:30:00.000-07:002009-05-11T04:30:00.000-07:00such a unconventional way to paint the romance of ...such a unconventional way to paint the romance of rain,the sweet painThe Sunflower Collectivehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01033056075938691658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7443649196688123428.post-2083933264850646242009-05-08T05:31:00.000-07:002009-05-08T05:31:00.000-07:00Fabulous. You defined the storm . Its amazing....K...Fabulous. You defined the storm . Its amazing....Keep writing. It was a pleasure reading the pen-paintings your wall...<br />Shine OnEnlightenerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18031570767417693104noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7443649196688123428.post-66899452249763530742009-05-08T04:12:00.000-07:002009-05-08T04:12:00.000-07:00Outstanding poem..just shows your artistic sense a...Outstanding poem..just shows your artistic sense and the love for worda you have..sorry I am 2 busy in a office work..anyway thanks for such a beautiful post..SUBHADIPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11071915185628271216noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7443649196688123428.post-59221974879794591462009-05-08T02:44:00.000-07:002009-05-08T02:44:00.000-07:00made me sort of eternally numb....its a 'wow' poem...made me sort of eternally numb....its a 'wow' poem...*nods his head in amazement*Akashhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17445975485350651034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7443649196688123428.post-31901392511552295672009-05-07T20:26:00.000-07:002009-05-07T20:26:00.000-07:00amrita, did ya know tht u r awesome?? omg, this is...amrita, did ya know tht u r awesome?? omg, this is such a beautiful portrayal!! i am sorry sweets, i cudn be here before, blame it on my work. i got aftrnun shifts, so wud be busy all day and wud be damn tired by night :(<br /><br />i am gona read it again!! i luvd it :) *respects*Anil Sawanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09598267987035726165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7443649196688123428.post-90694293377983530542009-05-07T10:35:00.000-07:002009-05-07T10:35:00.000-07:00Wow you can put the whole world in a few words ain...Wow you can put the whole world in a few words ain't it?? I can't browse for a few words in my brain to tell you how beautiful you make the rains sound...Sakshihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01681787664386745577noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7443649196688123428.post-13397891613627997402009-05-07T10:32:00.000-07:002009-05-07T10:32:00.000-07:00i HAVE ONLY ONE WORD FOR IT.
iTS BEAUTIFUL AND PE...i HAVE ONLY ONE WORD FOR IT.<br /><br />iTS BEAUTIFUL AND PERFECT FOR THE THEME "MONSOON"Mahesh Sindbandgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17099095274767291078noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7443649196688123428.post-76378768867707479192009-05-07T08:41:00.000-07:002009-05-07T08:41:00.000-07:00Indeed a good sense of depicting thoughts. You'd m...<I><B>Indeed a good sense of depicting thoughts. You'd make a good poet yourself. </B></I>Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12252356606949158032noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7443649196688123428.post-49979108519384188162009-05-07T00:46:00.000-07:002009-05-07T00:46:00.000-07:00Loved your skillful painting of rains in words:-)Loved your skillful painting of rains in words:-)Paresh Palichahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15521084555278491021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7443649196688123428.post-9185001260901638122009-05-06T23:15:00.000-07:002009-05-06T23:15:00.000-07:00hey that river is hoogli i mean gnages na and ya m...hey that river is hoogli i mean gnages na and ya monsoon in kolkota is a very beautiful time to be in actually its my birth placesudarshan benganihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17753177713277702776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7443649196688123428.post-35207762030705910832009-05-06T18:56:00.000-07:002009-05-06T18:56:00.000-07:00beautiful...really, i loved it!beautiful...really, i loved it!Phttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06473526239197886375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7443649196688123428.post-30510048488834943672009-05-06T18:20:00.000-07:002009-05-06T18:20:00.000-07:00I can smell that rain.
A wonderful gift of the Ea...I can smell that rain.<br /><br />A wonderful gift of the Earth.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7443649196688123428.post-56986304181402601912009-05-06T16:24:00.000-07:002009-05-06T16:24:00.000-07:00oops...i didn't mean to make anyone ashamed...in f...oops...i didn't mean to make anyone ashamed...in fact it had more to do with me being self-concious. that said, i don't regret it...this is truly one of the best rhyming poems i've read in a long time.joaquin carvelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03193680725157157864noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7443649196688123428.post-44040072051815083232009-05-06T16:11:00.000-07:002009-05-06T16:11:00.000-07:00Lovely images you have conjured up...esp the barit...Lovely images you have conjured up...esp the baritone of the clouds...great poetry!Sucharita Sarkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07802171314546508539noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7443649196688123428.post-50807710045690302822009-05-06T14:00:00.000-07:002009-05-06T14:00:00.000-07:00You make me miss India even more LGL. Sorry haven'...You make me miss India even more LGL. Sorry haven't been around for a while. Like I said in response to your comment on my blog. I just returned to London after a research project in Bihar. I feel I am getting pasteurized... boiling heat to freezing cold.....https://www.blogger.com/profile/04906142967487544257noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7443649196688123428.post-76017609119706564462009-05-06T13:58:00.000-07:002009-05-06T13:58:00.000-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.....https://www.blogger.com/profile/04906142967487544257noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7443649196688123428.post-7228327970753542272009-05-06T09:48:00.000-07:002009-05-06T09:48:00.000-07:00L'tl dear thanks for taking 'Passion' for your des...L'tl dear thanks for taking 'Passion' for your desktop bkground...your 'stealing' made my day:)Deepa Gopalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11120735937767070980noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7443649196688123428.post-89537388239472284542009-05-06T09:20:00.000-07:002009-05-06T09:20:00.000-07:00Ah! Refreshing! Loved the penultimate stanza... :)...Ah! Refreshing! Loved the penultimate stanza... :)<br /><br />But couldn't you rhyme that laaast stanza? :( <br /><br />Not taking away anything, though.<br /><br />Peace.<br /><br />---<br />A-M-R-I-T-O-R-U-P-A. There, no typos this time. :) I am familiar with Bengali names, actually.Kartzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07299013774325722797noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7443649196688123428.post-76569646988348063652009-05-06T08:01:00.000-07:002009-05-06T08:01:00.000-07:00Angry bees...
Cosmic dance..
Beautiful!
Thank yo...Angry bees...<br />Cosmic dance..<br /><br />Beautiful!<br /><br />Thank you for your sweet comments!<br />Oh me too, I shall be back! :-)Looking forward to your next post!What About The Girl?https://www.blogger.com/profile/00551227929697269183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7443649196688123428.post-40648867397322924742009-05-06T06:32:00.000-07:002009-05-06T06:32:00.000-07:00'Clouds in baritone
Voices sing,
A drop lands on
A...'Clouds in baritone<br />Voices sing,<br />A drop lands on<br />A heron’s wing'<br /><br />vivid imagination here..loved these lines...<br /><br />thanks for visitng..u r being blog rolled :)Himanshu Bhagathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11217398451105288069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7443649196688123428.post-71367340384960469242009-05-06T06:10:00.000-07:002009-05-06T06:10:00.000-07:00I actually read this lovely poem the other day, an...I actually read this lovely poem the other day, and planned to come back and comment and...sorry. I love the stormy description, and I can't help but think you must be looking forward to monsoon season!Catherine Viberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01354073276671196477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7443649196688123428.post-44670920781607624662009-05-06T03:43:00.000-07:002009-05-06T03:43:00.000-07:00You are a fine poet...I especially like the dancin...You are a fine poet...I especially like the dancing imagery...but all of it is extraordinary! Thank you for visiting my blog! It is always so much fun to make new friends!Sniffles and Smileshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10073156486641622612noreply@blogger.com